假设你是Li Ming, 你给你的笔友Tom寄去了一张你的全家福,然后在信中向他介绍你的全家。信的开头和结尾已给出,字数在60词左右。
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Yourfriend,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Tom,
This is a photo of my family. There are four people in my family. The tall man is my father. He's a doctor. The woman with glasses is my mother. She' s a Chinese teacher in a school. The little girl is my sister. Her name is Li Yan. She's ten years old. She is in Grade Two. My family is a happy one and I love it very much.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Your friend,
Li Ming
【解析】这是一篇提纲作文。根据一张全家福照片介绍自己的家人。根据写作内容可知用一般现在时,写作的句式主要是系表结构,人称为第三人称,注意主谓一致,同时还应注意写作中要有适当性的发挥。
写作亮点:文章通过照片的形式向我们介绍了自己的家人,层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。短文中出现了两个比较精美的句子The woman with glasses is my mother. My family is a happy one and I love it very much.